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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 6 years ago
  • In:Cities%s's Photo
    United States In:Cities Offline
    Man this looks really clean! I love how you left some open space and didn't try to crowd it too much. Nice work!
    posted 6 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Offline
    Definitely a strong addition and well placed at that. Just need a few of those other realism details like ride op booths and entry signs and such to push it over the top.
    posted 6 years ago
  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    Brazil MrTycoonCoaster Offline
    I honestly liked the roller coasters in red and blue.
    And I loved the trunk ride, very cool tracks and supports it was nice. :)
    Good work.
    posted 6 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    Good bobsled coaster! I think the foliage selection is a bit too random, and the shape of the foliage is also a bit too straight/square.

    posted 6 years ago
  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    United States ottersalad Offline

    @Faas: is there a tree/bush type I should add or remove. I'm open to changing things up. Also, wasn't sure how to address the transition from palm  trees to deciduous trees very well. Each area of the park has slight variation in trees. This area near the bobsled has a pine tree added to the mix. Other areas don't have the pine tree. And then obviously the area to the top of the screen is more tropical. 

    posted 6 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline
    First of all rotate your trees. The 3 pines between the bobsled and flatride are in one straight line and face the exact same way.

    I didnt know the difference in theming, but I would avoid Palm trees right next to pine trees.

    Edit: I'd remove the big oaks.
    posted 6 years ago
  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    United States ottersalad Offline
    Thanks! I’ll definitely rotate the trees. I forgot to do that.
    posted 6 years ago
  • mintliqueur%s's Photo
    Sweden mintliqueur Offline

    Best screen in this style I've seen in a while. It's really atmospheric! I love the logflume and bobsled coaster.

    posted 6 years ago
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    United States Coasterbill Offline

    I feel like the foliage between the Screaming Swing and flume is almost too linear. Break from the grid a tiny bit.

     

    Otherwise this is great.

    posted 6 years ago
  • Lagom%s's Photo
    Sweden Lagom Offline

    I couldn't agree more with mintliqueur's first sentence.
    Great job!

    posted 6 years ago
  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    United States ottersalad Offline
    Wait, what kind of style are you guys referring to?
    posted 6 years ago
  • Xtreme97%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Xtreme97 Offline
    I agree with coasterbill in that the way you've sectioned off the ride and area feels a bit square. The half gardens are a good way to detach from the grid and add a bit of non-linearity. I think your style is quite relaxed and refreshing though. Very much looking forward to this park.
    Also, gotta be honest I don't like the queue awnings. They look rather awkward.
    posted 6 years ago

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