Screenshot / Mega Lo Mart

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  posted 5 years ago

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  barnNID Offline

  Good take on it! The explosion is a nice touch, maybe some vents and other roof details could make it pop a bit more?

  posted 5 years ago

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  Mattk48 Offline

  Not a very busy day at the store. I think the red things are a bit tall, and like Barn said vents will help alot. Cool stuff.

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  Jappy Offline

  I'm not familiar with the source material, but if it's a store, I'd suggest to add some little details to make it alive. Biggest problem here IMO is the roof. Some air vents, AC units... would help this along.

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