Screenshot / Tivoli Graense - Forest Flyer

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  This is subtly really good. You have an eye for good colour schemes. I don't get why one piece of roof is grey, though.

  posted 6 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  I think the station is suffering a little from "every tile gets a window" technique. Layout looks interesting - maybe the twister trains are a better fit?

  posted 6 years ago

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  Terry Inferno Offline

  The one roof is grey because they're layered under the wooden ones, and the mechanical pole likely screwed up the drawing order temporarily, but that's easily fixed.
  
  Your foliage is improving with every new project. Magenta is one of the most powerful flower (flowerful?) colors. My only suggestion would be to intersperse some other plants, including moss green flowers, around the "lonely" beds to alleviate some of the squareness that has plagued NCSO flowers since the dawn of time.

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  ar2910 Offline

  I love your use of colour and how you've struck a balance between a selective tile set and some really diverse architecture.

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  Jappy Offline

  I think the station might be a tad brown. But I am in love with your foliage work. Those purple flowers work really well.

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  Thank you for the compliments, y'all. The station is a touch brown, so I'll figure out what to do with that.
  
  Terry is right about the one roof piece being gray. Added something to the top of it, but forgot to go back and fix the layers before I took the screenshot. Ah well.
  
  Any other comments or tips? Thanks for them all so far!

  posted 6 years ago

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