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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    Rockwork along the water is really nice. Keep it up!
  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    Phenomenal work, perhaps the best of yours yet! The landscaping and atmosphere here is incredible. 

    The one nitpick I'd make is that I think the left side of that L-shaped building should only be one story, with a rooftop balcony or just a lower roof. 

  • CedarPoint6%s's Photo

    Some of your best work yet!  Really liking how the rockwork layers in there.  The little bridge and waterfall on the left is also pleasant.  And I appreciate that your path grows and shrinks naturally around what you've built.  Frames everything quite nicely.

     

    A few thoughts: 

    - Consider maybe some subtle channel for your rapids.  Right now those boats would be knocking into the plants or those stairs and stuff like that.  A channel or some guards may help the overall look from a realistic operations perspective.

    - Your buildings look nice but be careful about getting into the trope of window + wall + a frame of trim.  It can get repetitive if you're not careful.  What's there now is fine I think, but I wouldn't do too many more than this on other buildings.  Maybe a tower or feature on one of the buildings to break it up.

    - I'm sure this is on your list, but pathway details like lamps, benches, and maybe some little kiosk carts will liven it up spectacularly.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    proud of you! some small tips: make the wood a different color of brown from your rocks (I usually go saturated brown). follow cp6's advice: making square trims around every wall pulls the 'theme' out of the building. finally- peeps! colorful awnings, benches, streetlights, racks of souvenirs on the paths, etc. a popcorn stall. the real theme park details to highlight the great landscape you've put it in.

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    My god that rapids is awesome. And such sexy rockwork.... Best work of you so far without a second of doubt. 

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Wow, the rockwork and foliage are truly amazing. Wonderful work. With improved architecture, structures, and some warmer atmosphere around the paths (stalls, map racks, seating areas, lamps, bins etc.) I think you'll end up with something very special. Keep up the good work.

  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Great work! I really like the rockwork as well. A suggestion: try to add some more details to your architecture to make it less blocky. You could think of adding chimneys, balconies, side buildings, sheds, dormer windows, etc.

  • posix%s's Photo

    Good to see some RCT and progress from you.

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Lovely screen. Your architecture needs to catch up to your impressive foliage skills. Keep it up man!

  • MK98%s's Photo
    Nice to see some work from you again. Really nice progress.
  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    That's a really top-tier presentation of the LOTR rocks. Hats off.
  • AvanineCommuter%s's Photo
    Imma steal that rockwork. Nice job!

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