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08-April 19
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posted 6 years ago
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Ling Offline

The dark green color in the foliage looks way too saturated to be natural. In general the foliage under the coaster is very messy and haphazard. The architecture is lovely and the overall effect of the colors is solid - the coaster layout looks unconventional, but interesting and you've taken a good amount of care for the supports. Would love to see more of the project.
posted 6 years ago
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barnNID Offline

The dark green color in the foliage looks way too saturated to be natural. In general the foliage under the coaster is very messy and haphazard.

Thank you for the feedback! I've been trying to rework the foliage to make it look a little better, but unfortunately foliage is a place where I need to improve a lot
posted 6 years ago
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Jappy Offline

If i may give you another tip about foliage, don't spread it out like this. Try to clump it together like in this screen. Add shrubs and bushes under trees as underbrush, and thin the grass out when you get to the edge of a patch of trees.

https://www.nedesign...7/forest-slide/
posted 6 years ago
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Coasterbill Offline

Lovely!
posted 6 years ago
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][ntamin22 Offline

Fun stuff! Nice interaction between the coaster elements. The architecture is nice as well, but I'm not sure what the buildings have to do with one another.
posted 6 years ago
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barnNID Offline

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

Add shrubs and bushes under trees as underbrush, and thin the grass out when you get to the edge of a patch of trees.

This helped a lot with the foliage! Thank you for the link:)
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