Screenshot / Mighty Wombat
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04-April 19
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LOL the mighty wombat, what a name!
I like the white restaurant awning in the thumbnail, but think maybe the rest of that building needs some more work, detail, a window or two or something -- maybe try something other than trackitecture for the roof.
Looks good, the foliage is as close as you're gonna get to bushland within NCSO. I think the station colour is a little too overpowering and imo the roof on the brick building should probably not be track since you've used it so much in the area, it needs a little variety.
The name is so weird lmao, wombats don't fly! It's silly in a fun way. Highly suggest you name and theme it after swooping magpies because those bastards are terrifying
The path isn't very organic so maybe either curved fencing or a few diagonals could help it out a bit
Keep the name. It's funny.
I agree with Shnupz about the trackitecture, just standard grey roof tiles would work fine here. But I don't agree the path is unnatural. Doing it like this feels like a certain classic way of building RCT and is quite pretty even. People need to be less afraid of the tile in RCT.
I don't think using white for the fences along the paths is a good choice. It really accentuates (is that a word?) the grid like shape of the path. Try to make it a bit more organic.
Also consider using actual roofs.
See? NCSO is fun to do.
Try to get some more height differences in there. The train tracks could, for instance, be elevated. Some water could also do wonders. The rest seems quite fine, I think.
My only suggestion would be to rotate the square sections of the queue awnings 90° so that they match with the triangle ends.
I look forward to seeing how this turns out, and I'm staying tuned for your next project (Humongous Melonhead)