Screenshot / Beach Blaster

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Cocoa Offline

  quite nice. I think you did the paths and light strings very well

  posted 6 years ago

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  theflowdiskord Offline

  lovely walls and surfaces. are those palm trees made out of barrels?

  posted 6 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Probably your best screen yet Fred!  Only thing I really noticed was the yellow roadline glitching through the car on the flat ride.

   

  Does look quite nice though, maybe the woodie could use footers or something if this map is trying to focus on the coaster.

  posted 6 years ago

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  csw Offline

  Maybe a bit more of that brick path on the right side of the screen? I like this otherwise. 

  posted 6 years ago

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  FredD Offline

  
  

  Maybe a bit more of that brick path on the right side of the screen? I like this otherwise. 

   

  That's a good suggestion to make that piece a bit more interesting! Thanks  

   

   

  @ FlowDiskord: don't think so, Liam made those trees. 

  posted 6 years ago

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  Scoop Offline

  I think some of the buildings need a taller first story. I do agree that it looks like some of your best work.

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  Jaguar Offline

  Great screen... the composition is really nice and that flat ride is extremely good but I agree with scoop, mainly on the bumper cars.

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  inthemanual Offline

  It's really clean and American. It's also a bit flat feeling. I think making the first floor of some buildings taller could help open things up a bit, or offsetting a couple buildings for a bit of depth.

  posted 6 years ago

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  FredD Offline

  I thought the dodgems were pretty OK when it comes to first floor height?! I think the buildings left and right of it need it more, so I'll adjust them and see what it gives on the dodgem cars. 

   

  Thanks for all the feedback!

  posted 6 years ago

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  dr dirt Offline

  Dude this is great, what it’s missing is some hits of larger trees just to get the larger shapes in there.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  good good, i loved
  i liked buildings and roofs

  posted 6 years ago

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  Dragons Offline

  This looks great Fred, very clean, I can't wait to see more!

  posted 6 years ago

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  WhosLeon Offline

  If a bit bare (way too bare imo), a solid foundation that could turn into great work

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  Jappy Offline

  Definitely some of your best work yet. You keep improving with every park.

  posted 6 years ago

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