Screenshot / Tidal Falls

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Rofl%s's Photo

    Looks lovely, just wondering why you put those grey blocks/pillar pieces on the blue roof on the right. I think it looks better without.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    i quite like that coastal tacos building. the rest are a tiny bit square and undetailed I'd say- i think you need something to break up that long straight path edge (planters on the sides of building work wonders)

  • posix%s's Photo

    This looks good. I like your unfussed and can-do parkmaking mindset. Perhaps a bit sharp of a path line. Its composition could be a little less linear and more complex. Perhaps sometimes broken up with small trees or flowers, or little corners to go into, etc.

  • chemist%s's Photo

    I like the color transition from orange to the blues. Buildings could use a little more detail to up this screen. Why the light brown for the gated fences? Why not black?

  • PraetorMagna%s's Photo

    I like the foliage a lot! And also the fences next to the paths are neat. The buildings could use some extra detail but look already great!

  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    Thanks for the feedback! The yellow/white/orange building is gonna get replaced. Not very happy with it. I’ll try to make a different shape and have a nice seating area/garden.
    And I’ll definitwly detail more!
  • Ling%s's Photo

    Great to see more work from you. Love how open and uncluttered this screen feels.

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Nice to have you back. You've definitely improved recently, it shows. The buildings are fine iMO, especially the one on the top right looks great. The main problem with this is the one Cocoa already adressed, the straightness of that path. Some twists, turns, buildings moved forwards or backwards, planters...would help in breaking it up a bit.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    Heres the new area.. changed the building and added some flowers and stuff. I'll address the straightness in other areas of the park!

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  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    nice nice :)
  • Description

    Hey all.. I've been lurking recently. Took a couple of months off.. moved into a new house, didn't have a computer, saved up some money, and got me a new one!

    Figured I'd post a screenshot of what I've been sorta working on. Much of this screen was built pre-move back in October... but the buildings and foliage on the left side of the screen are all new. Hopefully I can get my shit together and get this project closer to completion!

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