Screenshot / avonturenpark naardermeer - caslte

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  posted 11 years ago

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  csw Offline

  If it's a castle, shouldn't it be more monochromatic and have some tall spires? It doesn't look all that bad, but it definitely does not look like a castle.

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  Lotte Offline

  i tried to make it look less like a castle from the medieval era, and more from the 1600's - 1800's. that are more for hosting the wealthy. those castles are a lot less like bunkers and thus look a lot more welcoming i think. the older castles with really high walls wouldn't really fit in in this park.

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  robbie92 Offline

  CSW, not all castles are like that...

   

  It's a really nice start, though I feel like you should make sure that the various buildings inside the fortifications are a bit more cohesive. It would help this read more clearly as a singular entity.

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  Lotte Offline

  how? i could change the colour of the small buildings with the black roofs to brown. but that would probably make it more boring. how would you do it robbie?

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  robbie92 Offline

  Make the colors similar, make the buildings' architecture similar, and repeat motifs; that will make it so that it doesn't look quite so random.

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  csw Offline

  Let me clarify: if this was not labeled 'castle' I would not have known it was a castle. I know they aren't all the same.

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