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  posted 6 years ago

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  Scoop Offline

  Very cute looking. I would look at some real world archly of the same type. The basics are there but the facades do need some work. Good start though.
  
  Edit: just noticed the wooden coaster supports too. Kinda cool looking.

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  SimFox Offline

  Very cute looking. I would look at some real world archly of the same type. The basics are there but the facades do need some work. Good start though.
  
  Edit: just noticed the wooden coaster supports too. Kinda cool looking.

   

  Yeah. I like the way the x/y-axis facades look, but the one that is really bugging me is the diagonal one. Like...it looks alright, but it has almost a cartoony look compared to those immediately around it.
  
  Also...I've never quoted someone to reply on here before. Hopefully I didn't jack this comment up. Lol
  
  EDIT: looks like I did it right.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Lykos_Gen Offline

  I like the start of your project. The only thing that seems to bug me is the fence around the water. Are there supposed to be a gaps or is it glitching a little.

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  SimFox Offline

  I like the start of your project. The only thing that seems to bug me is the fence around the water. Are there supposed to be a gaps or is it glitching a little.
  

  
  Good eye! It’s glitching with the shrubbery. I will go back through and reorder things with the tile inspector once I’m at the ‘polishing things up’ stage and that should go away. Thanks for the feedback.

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  Royr Offline

  Good stuff SimFox, i'm curious to see more! 

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Kind of looks like a turn-of-the-century pier park, good start!  You could definitely push it that direction with more lights and some flags.

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  RWE Offline

  Not bad of a start, you're definitely improving into the right direction! It looks a bit too bare for me though, listen to ][22 and add more stuff! Try to make it look more inviting from a peep's perspective and give those buildings some purpose!

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  G Force Offline

  Overall some solid stuff, oddly feels a lot like 2008-2009 era realism with the trim usage and objects.

   

  Only things I don't like are the nonsensical backstage on the left and the diagonal facade.  If you're going to do backstage, make it functional and logical, always a pet peeve of mine when people just plop tarmac down behind buildings without thinking if it would actually serve a purpose.

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  SimFox Offline

  Overall some solid stuff, oddly feels a lot like 2008-2009 era realism with the trim usage and objects.
   
  Only things I don't like are the nonsensical backstage on the left and the diagonal facade.  If you're going to do backstage, make it functional and logical, always a pet peeve of mine when people just plop tarmac down behind buildings without thinking if it would actually serve a purpose.
  

  
  Thanks for the feedback. I agree that the diagonal building needs some work. As for the backstage area, I feel ya, but I worked at a small, local amusement park and we had a back patio area similar to that one behind our main counter service building (although maybe not quite as long and thin, it just didn’t look right when I did it thicker originally) that we called “the cage”. Its purpose was that it was a smoking area for the employees who worked as cashiers and/or food preparers.

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I loved the style, very nice and charming

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