Screenshot / Pirates Of Malacca

07-January 19
Yangshou Valley Thrill & Water Park
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posted 6 years ago
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Liampie Offline

I really like this a lot. The monochrome archy is kinda weird but it kinda works. One thing that does bu me is that you're not super consistent with the colour of wood. It's all vibrant brown on the ship, and on the buildings the wood is mostly pale. Stick to a system... Vibrant poopy brown for the vertical surfaces (the balcony fences!), and keep the floors pale brown like they also are on the ship. Do it consistently and the area will look much tighter. Also not sold on white as support colour but I'm not sure would be a better colour right now.
posted 6 years ago
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Recurious Offline

I see what you are saying with the inconsistency in colours. My reasoning for this was that since the archy is so monochrome I wanted at least some colour variation to make sure the whole thing doesn't just become a brown blob. But I will definitely investigate trying to get a more consistent system for the colours although I'm not 100% sure on which colours you exactly mean by vibrant poopy brown etc.

For the coaster support colour I tried a bunch, water blue looks kind of okay but it clashes with the water below it. Dark green also looks kinda cool so I might go with that.
posted 6 years ago
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Version1 Offline

Very good screen, but the sail of the ship doesn't look right to me in a way that I can't really articulate.
posted 6 years ago
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Recurious Offline

Yea I know what you mean V1, I think the sail maybe looks a bit weird due to its very rectangular shape. I might try to add some details to make the shape less rectangular and if that doesn't work maybe I will use a custom object.
posted 6 years ago
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MrTycoonCoaster Offline

I loved the ship
posted 6 years ago
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bigshootergill Offline

Cool screen! Love the ride interaction with the scenery
posted 6 years ago
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csw Offline

Another nice screen ruined with an awful crop.
posted 6 years ago
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Recurious Offline

Another nice screen ruined with an awful crop.

Ah you should look at some of my other screens, they all have horrendous crops. Luckily the park itself won't be cropped .

@bsg and MrTycoonCoaster

Thanks for the kind words!
posted 6 years ago
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