Screenshot / Grace's

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Timothy Cross Offline

  Nice curves on the b&m, might look better in red. Great screen but I think the colors need work.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Version1 Offline

  Good screen

  posted 6 years ago

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  RWE Offline

  I'm not sure about all the grass, look good tho!

  posted 6 years ago

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  MK98 Offline

  Great screen, lovely composition, but I think the colors are a bit boring. Maybe you could've made the restaurant white or with different colors for the windows and shutters. Just to make the screen a little brighter. Also some flowers or a different underbush can do wonders.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Terry Inferno Offline

  Coaster looks great, support job flows nicely as always.
  
  The foliage would benefit from some light olive green grass interspersed with the brown (mainly around the edges) to break up the stark contrast between dead grass and perfectly pristine birch trees and juniper bushes. I think it would look more natural that way without detracting from the overall idea.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Iron Rattler Offline

  I'm torn on the foliage mix, I think it worked really well on your smaller similar RCT&F entry, but I'm not sure if it works in this quantity. I also think a little more green besides those big old trees could help. On the other hand I personally love the pink color choice for the coaster. 

  posted 6 years ago

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  saxman1089 Offline

  Since Ive got a lot of comments on it, I think I need to explain the foliage. That being said, I do realize that explaining it means I have failed in forming the proper narrative.
  
  The park is built on a former industrial site, and as such there wont be a lot of tall foliage. See below for a reference image. I threw some trees in as well just because I felt all grass was a bit boring, but I may change out the big green flourishing trees for something that looks a bit more dead. I may also add more ruin-type stuff (brick/pavement walkways, foundations, etc) and thin out the grass in places to better reveal it.
  
  I personally like the look of the grass a lot, but I can see why others dont. Ill work on improving it to make it a bit clearer what Im going for.
  
  

  posted 6 years ago

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  posix Offline

  That photo immediately triggered this for me: https://www.nedesign...f-pollution-22/

  posted 6 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Something does feel off about the colors to me, not really sure what it is though.

   

  Might help if the toon supports had the flanges on them, when you don't use them and color them grey it sometimes looks a bit weird.

  posted 6 years ago

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  MrTycoonCoaster Fan Offline

  I love this kind of foliagen, it gets really cool.
  It seems to me that the roller coaster is 10, I like the supports in white

  posted 6 years ago

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