In all seriousness, I really like this screen. I really like the building, but be careful you're not adding too much trackitecture. I'd say the purple ghost train track is already too much.
For the rest I'm looking forward to this. For the foliage, might I suggest some shrubs and grass, mixed with some Egyptian ruins as rocks?
It's nice, but it would benefit greatly from a little more foliage. Some bushes and small trees should do the trick. I'm also not sold on that latticework (the regular one should be just fine too) but it's definitely inventive.
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Jappy Offline
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In all seriousness, I really like this screen. I really like the building, but be careful you're not adding too much trackitecture. I'd say the purple ghost train track is already too much.
For the rest I'm looking forward to this. For the foliage, might I suggest some shrubs and grass, mixed with some Egyptian ruins as rocks?
Scoop Offline
cool stuff. I would get rid of the looping coaster track and change the color of the air powered track. keep it up.
Lilith Offline
cool archy and lovely colors! the foliage in the corner looks nice but the right side needs some landscaping details
you could use plants or something on top of the trellis instead of looping track but that might be a little too messy still
Impulse Offline
It's nice, but it would benefit greatly from a little more foliage. Some bushes and small trees should do the trick. I'm also not sold on that latticework (the regular one should be just fine too) but it's definitely inventive.
Cocoa Offline
the building is quite nice. without context, the empty space looks just empty but possibly it fills a role in the greater scheme of things
In:Cities Offline
The purple accent is great and is needed. But the trackitecture itself feels forced. Maybe try another way to work that color in?
Either way, this is fresh and I like it.
dr dirt Offline
excellent
][ntamin22 Offline
that's a good-lookin' wooden
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csw Offline
Nice stuff. Reminds me of some of the Vermillion screens. Don't listen to the haters, open space is awesome.