Screenshot / Tornado and Apache

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Scoop Offline

  That brown is really throwing the screen off. i like a lot of the rest of it though.

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  Liampie Offline

  It's a bit messy honestly. I think that coloured flanges on the supports are generally a bad idea, just make them plain white? Water slides also tend to be the same colour on the outside and inside, so in this case the pink slide should be pink on the inside as well. Or the outside should be white.

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  Jappy Offline

  I like all of it, apart from the brown slide. That thing looks ugly. I suggest a lighter colour like blue.

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  chemist Offline

  that brown is horrible. I'll be honest.

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  I see a boat.

   

  Foliage under the pink slide is a little weird. Scattered brown flowers?

   

  I don't think the toilet bowl needs to be so large to be effective. Maybe try something a little smaller?

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  I hate the brown slide, but love everything else. I echo CC9 on slimming down the size of the slide, and definitely, change the colours.

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  theflowdiskord Online

  yeah agree about the size and colour

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  liked everything, especially the house with green details, very good

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