Screenshot / Mainstreet Heckengäupark

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    The lanterns are wonderful.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    When I saw a smaller screen of this on Discord, I thought that it was nice but that the paths outside the screen would make or break it. I think you pulled it off, this is a very good looking main street! I'm pretty confident this is your best stuff ever. Do you realise how much you've improved?

     

    Some pointers:

    - Rotate the red tile paths, so the tiles run perpendicular to the direction of the street, instead of parallel.

    - Architecture is very pale and dark. Add some colourful signs.

    - These trees work well with the theme, but don't help with the colour problem. Maybe Chinese Cedars in a bright colour?

    - Vary the interiors and things on the ground level. Just map racks, map racks and map racks? Often in pale colours too. Even if you do want to stick to just using that object, you can still make it look different in every store.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    good technical points from liam. a very good screen though, easily your best. phantasialand-ish?

     

    I'd recommend using a bit of the saturated brown to liven it up. you can make some of the poles and fences that you use as accents on the buildings this color and it'll make the whole screen pop, and improve the atmosphere. small stuff though, as I said very good already

  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    some times i really really just want to buy multiple copies of the same map from different stores, just to see if one's slightly different, yaknow?
  • WhosLeon%s's Photo

    definitely my favourite screen from you yet. Liam has some golden tips!

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Map racks are on point. 10/10.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    some times i really really just want to buy multiple copies of the same map from different stores, just to see if one's slightly different, yaknow?


    If you don't secretly take like 12 copies of the park map and all the other pamphlets and maybe one in spanish just for fun are you really a NE member 
  • G Force%s's Photo

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    If you don't secretly take like 12 copies of the park map and all the other pamphlets and maybe one in spanish just for fun are you really a NE member 

     

     

    I know for a fact the answer to this is a no.

     

     

     

    As for the screenshot, I think the archy maybe needs more color?  Seems a bit dry at the moment, but I do love how it sort of stretches over the street and how cavernous it feels, nice work.

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    This is great dude. keep going on the up and up.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo

    nice, getting the vibes from the golden age of facade architecture.  my favorite thing from you probably.  Take Liam's advice, sprinkle in pops of color with the path details and signs, etc.

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Yes. Yeeees... YEEEESSSS!!

     

    Great work V1, easily the best thing you ever made so far. I got nothing to point out, apart from the stuff Liam already mentioned. Now don't you go give up on this!

  • FredD%s's Photo

    This is an awesome screen. You're improving a lot lately. Getting Phantasialand vibes from this screen. I think Liam nailed all the suggestions.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Jesus this is good....

  • MrTycoonCoaster%s's Photo
    The lanterns are wonderful :)

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