When I saw a smaller screen of this on Discord, I thought that it was nice but that the paths outside the screen would make or break it. I think you pulled it off, this is a very good looking main street! I'm pretty confident this is your best stuff ever. Do you realise how much you've improved?
Some pointers:
- Rotate the red tile paths, so the tiles run perpendicular to the direction of the street, instead of parallel.
- Architecture is very pale and dark. Add some colourful signs.
- These trees work well with the theme, but don't help with the colour problem. Maybe Chinese Cedars in a bright colour?
- Vary the interiors and things on the ground level. Just map racks, map racks and map racks? Often in pale colours too. Even if you do want to stick to just using that object, you can still make it look different in every store.
good technical points from liam. a very good screen though, easily your best. phantasialand-ish?
I'd recommend using a bit of the saturated brown to liven it up. you can make some of the poles and fences that you use as accents on the buildings this color and it'll make the whole screen pop, and improve the atmosphere. small stuff though, as I said very good already
If you don't secretly take like 12 copies of the park map and all the other pamphlets and maybe one in spanish just for fun are you really a NE member
I know for a fact the answer to this is a no.
As for the screenshot, I think the archy maybe needs more color? Seems a bit dry at the moment, but I do love how it sort of stretches over the street and how cavernous it feels, nice work.
nice, getting the vibes from the golden age of facade architecture. my favorite thing from you probably. Take Liam's advice, sprinkle in pops of color with the path details and signs, etc.
Great work V1, easily the best thing you ever made so far. I got nothing to point out, apart from the stuff Liam already mentioned. Now don't you go give up on this!
So, this is the current version of the mainstreet for my new park. There are a few things I'm not 100% on and that I want to change but I thought why not get some of your opinions in to have even more ideas towards possible changes.
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ottersalad Offline
The lanterns are wonderful.
Liampie Online
When I saw a smaller screen of this on Discord, I thought that it was nice but that the paths outside the screen would make or break it. I think you pulled it off, this is a very good looking main street! I'm pretty confident this is your best stuff ever. Do you realise how much you've improved?
Some pointers:
- Rotate the red tile paths, so the tiles run perpendicular to the direction of the street, instead of parallel.
- Architecture is very pale and dark. Add some colourful signs.
- These trees work well with the theme, but don't help with the colour problem. Maybe Chinese Cedars in a bright colour?
- Vary the interiors and things on the ground level. Just map racks, map racks and map racks? Often in pale colours too. Even if you do want to stick to just using that object, you can still make it look different in every store.
Cocoa Offline
good technical points from liam. a very good screen though, easily your best. phantasialand-ish?
I'd recommend using a bit of the saturated brown to liven it up. you can make some of the poles and fences that you use as accents on the buildings this color and it'll make the whole screen pop, and improve the atmosphere. small stuff though, as I said very good already
Xeccah Offline
WhosLeon Offline
definitely my favourite screen from you yet. Liam has some golden tips!
RWE Offline
Map racks are on point. 10/10.
][ntamin22 Offline
If you don't secretly take like 12 copies of the park map and all the other pamphlets and maybe one in spanish just for fun are you really a NE member
G Force Offline
I know for a fact the answer to this is a no.
As for the screenshot, I think the archy maybe needs more color? Seems a bit dry at the moment, but I do love how it sort of stretches over the street and how cavernous it feels, nice work.
Scoop Offline
This is great dude. keep going on the up and up.
dr dirt Online
nice, getting the vibes from the golden age of facade architecture. my favorite thing from you probably. Take Liam's advice, sprinkle in pops of color with the path details and signs, etc.
Jappy Fan Offline
Yes. Yeeees... YEEEESSSS!!
Great work V1, easily the best thing you ever made so far. I got nothing to point out, apart from the stuff Liam already mentioned. Now don't you go give up on this!
FredD Offline
This is an awesome screen. You're improving a lot lately. Getting Phantasialand vibes from this screen. I think Liam nailed all the suggestions.
Coasterbill Offline
Jesus this is good....
MrTycoonCoaster Offline