Station looks great. Most of the buildings look excellent actually. Coaster is very... flat for how tall it is. Could use more trees around the coaster track (similar density to the planters) and pick just one or two colors for the flowers for contrast.
Very good work though. Nothing mindblowing but what is on the map is quite pleasant and refined. The first thing I'd change to make things a bit more interesting to look at is giving the coaster some kind of signature element. Call it an eyecatcher or a money shot. Just any taller element that stands out really, so that the coaster isn't just a mess of low hills and low turns.
I disagree with Ling about the flowers, a randomised pattern of a few pre-selected colours like you have is different and interesting.
I choose against making the first hill a zero-g roll because I figured that a somewhat more family friendly coaster, while admittedly not as interesting, would fit the area better.
Very nice screen! I really like it a lot. Shame there's so much grey though. I like that you tried to break it up with the flowers, but there's so much around the go kart track. I suggest colouring the guard rail in a red/white pattern to break the monotonous black.
it has been well documented that my favorite activity is to crash my go kart through a brick wall in a competition to see how high i can rack up a medical bill and i'm glad that theres someone in the RCT community letting me live out my pasttime virtually
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Ling Offline
Station looks great. Most of the buildings look excellent actually. Coaster is very... flat for how tall it is. Could use more trees around the coaster track (similar density to the planters) and pick just one or two colors for the flowers for contrast.
Cocoa Offline
theres a 4chan rct scene?
Xeccah Offline
/rct/ is still a thing?
shnupz Offline
Yeah, been around for about 5 years now I think?
Liampie Offline
Considering it's 4chan this is incredibly mundane
Very good work though. Nothing mindblowing but what is on the map is quite pleasant and refined. The first thing I'd change to make things a bit more interesting to look at is giving the coaster some kind of signature element. Call it an eyecatcher or a money shot. Just any taller element that stands out really, so that the coaster isn't just a mess of low hills and low turns.
I disagree with Ling about the flowers, a randomised pattern of a few pre-selected colours like you have is different and interesting.
Nice debut screen!
Narc Offline
Thanks for the feedback!
I choose against making the first hill a zero-g roll because I figured that a somewhat more family friendly coaster, while admittedly not as interesting, would fit the area better.
Oh, if you only knew what I named the staff.
Jappy Offline
Very nice screen! I really like it a lot. Shame there's so much grey though. I like that you tried to break it up with the flowers, but there's so much around the go kart track. I suggest colouring the guard rail in a red/white pattern to break the monotonous black.
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