Screenshot / Coaster Station

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  posted 6 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  Quite a nice first screen, despite being unfinished. It definitely shows skill. I really like your use of colours.

   

  Only remarks I have now are that the top of those flat parts of the coaster station's roof would probably be better if they weren't yellow. Grey or black would be better. Also the path could use some love in the form of benches and bins.

   

  Apart from that, I'd like to see more. Maybe try to post a more finished screen next time? I look forward to see what you come up with!

  posted 6 years ago

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  mintliqueur Offline

  Ah, another swede!

   

  Definitely a quite impressive first screen. Jappy makes some good points. It's also rather unclear what the theme is. But the talent is there! Now to cultivate and refine it. 

  posted 6 years ago

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  Provokatören. Offline

  Thanks for the kind words, will try and do more. Kinda rough not building stuff in a blocks. The theme of the coaster is a bit africa therefor the brownish color on the station buildings!

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  SSSammy Offline

  a very promising screen. excited to see how your style develops

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  ottersalad Offline

  Looks awesome! Welcome!

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  Cocoa Offline

  the textures are a bit funky maybe but i like the overall placement and setup

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  hooo very good

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