Screenshot / Three Rivers Park #7

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  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Wow, this is awesome. Just a shame about the cramped paths, which is something I notice in all of your screens. Every path is two tiles wide... The theming needs more space to breath!

  • 5dave%s's Photo

    I agree with Liam here. Make those paths wider!

    I like all the blue spots in this, although it's not really visible from a peeps perspective.

     

    Looking forward to this!

     

    "MFG"

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    This is, by and far, my favorite screen of yours.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Cool!

  • Poke%s's Photo

    Really interesting style.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Really love this. I just think the blue is possibly too harsh.

     

    Perhaps use a lighter blue or a turquoise.

     

    Great stuff.

  • Lotte%s's Photo

    i'd add purple, adds to the egyptian theme, also i'd love some references to noteworthy faraos like narmer, anachaton and cleopathra

  • thirteen%s's Photo
    Thank you guys so much for your comments! I didnt even consider to make the paths wider, but I really see what you mean and will consider this for my future work.
  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Take a look at Rivers of Babylon if you haven't already. So much you can learn from that park, path proportions for example. I think the park might be up your alley anyway!

  • Jymn%s's Photo

    I, myself, hate wide paths, but you could use a little more neutral (less busy) space on this screen. Maybe instead of whatever ride that is to the right of the fountain

  • csw%s's Photo

    ^The park's already been released. 

  • nin%s's Photo
    I absolutely love that Sphinx object. Always looks cool when people use it in their parks.

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