Screenshot / Bumbly Beach - Second entrance

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  posted 6 years ago

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  battle boy Offline

  A very nice entrance. Sometimes creating even the simplest one can be a problem. Because this - bumbly beach, I would not complain about more trees. But maybe a few ...?

  posted 6 years ago

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  MK98 Offline

  Not bad! Maybe the paths make it a bit boring. For example: the backstage stuff behind the restaurant merge too much with the paths underneath, but I like the rest.

  posted 6 years ago

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  ottersalad Offline

  Entrance archway looks great. I agree with MK.. perhaps add another path texture to help differentiate the backstage and the main walkway.

  posted 6 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  I think you could maybe get some more detail or better texture into the entrance arch, seems a little simplistic for a park like this. Nice work though, love this little project.

  posted 6 years ago

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  Mattk48 Offline

  Love the general vibe of this park. Fantastic colours. That backstage area could use some trash bins or other small detail. Maybe some road lines as it looks like that gate could let a vehicle of some sort in. 

  posted 6 years ago

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  Xtreme97 Offline

  I agree that the path looks a bit plain. I quite like the colours and style of the entrance arch though and I'm loving the beach huts.

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  saxman1089 Offline

  Looking good japster! Throw some trim around the edge of the roof on that blue building to differentiate it from the backstage area.

  posted 6 years ago

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