Screenshot / Bumbly Beach - Midway Mania

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    Love most of it. I'm not sold on the grey crazy path, I think something darker and less busy would work better. I think you're totally capturing the boardwalk feel though, which is important for your park.

    Looking forward to more!

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    The grey crazy path isn't everywhere, just in the 'oldest' parts of the park.

  • MK98%s's Photo

    I love it! Some cool stuff here and there, but yeah it's also a bit busy. Idk if that's the paths tbh, it has a lot of different texures what makes it somewhat busier too.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo

    The log flume looks crammed, but I really like that. Nice vibes.

  • FK+Coastermind%s's Photo

    The atmosphere in this is great, and it has a really good crammed midway feel that's perfect for a beach-side boardwalk type park. I would say be careful with textures though. When handling a more chaotic composition of buildings, it's important to use the right textures to convey depth and place everything within the area.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    I'd love to see you clean things up a bit, cull some bad textures, and scale things better
  • Faas%s's Photo
    The log flume station is all over the place, as is the rockwork. I'm not a fan of this screen.
  • Jappy%s's Photo

    How would you guys suggest to improve this texturewise?

  • Poke%s's Photo

    I wouldn't change a thing tbh. Yes, there's a bunch of textures, but they all feel appropriately chosen and make sense for the theme. Some great colour co-ordination going on too.

     

    Awesome screen, jappy.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    How would you guys suggest to improve this texturewise?


    Maybe stick to one roof type and colour on the log flume station?
  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    i agree with jappy that the rooves are a pain and also that wooden texture really doesnt sell the theme well
  • csw%s's Photo

    I think the windows on the central building are a little too big, but otherwise it's a great screen. 

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Looks fun

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Love the chairlift being there. A little hard to grasp the composition with the screenshot cropped as it is, but I'm excited to see more.

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