Screenshot / FBF - JWAK

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  posted 7 years ago

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  Faas Offline

  Those steel roofs hurt. Also this could have benefited from a bit more colour. Example: you could have given the small statues and plant pots a more popping colour. 

  posted 7 years ago

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  Poke Offline

  I think the steel roofs actually look good here.

   

  The screen feels washed out but it works well cause of how carefully considered your colour pops are. good stuff

  posted 7 years ago

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  WhosLeon Offline

  Wonderful screen!

  posted 7 years ago

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  saxman1089 Offline

  I wish you had broken up the off-white path a bit more, but a wonderful screen nonetheless.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  Thanks all. I still personally think this is my best released work to date but I hope Bumbly Beach will surpass this.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  This was so close to being really really good but it felt like you didn't have the ambition or want to push it and, in the process, probably redo everything in this screen. At the time it really showed promise for you though. 

  posted 7 years ago

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