Screenshot / Industrial 1

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  posted 7 years ago

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  In:Cities Offline

  Very nice start.
  
  Reminds me of a lot of the older work I used to enjoy, and that's a really good thing.
  
  The overabundance of supports are a little distracting though, and I think this could benefit from some wider paths and elevation changes. Or maybe a river running under the path and coasters to give them something to interact with.
  
  Nice work, and welcome if you're new around here!

  posted 7 years ago

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  MK98 Offline

  Welcome! I've got two major critiques:

  1. The layouts look like spaghetti. It could use some structure and maybe make them less compact.

  2. The foliage needs work. That's kinda hard to explain but here is a good tutorial:

  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zJl

   

  Hope you find this usefull!

  posted 7 years ago

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  MrTycoonCoaster Offline

  I liked the tubes and the yellow building

  posted 7 years ago

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