Screenshot / Patriot's Revenge

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  Comment System Offline

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  Cocoa Offline

  leak

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  Nice and cozy little bit of work here! I love the facade of buildings. Foliage is nice and cozy, but I feel like there could be an extra tree type or two thrown in the mix, and more of the foliage. It feels a small bit sparse.

   

  I'm also not a huge fan of how 'shoehorned' the station to Patriot's Revenge is. It's a tiny station, and shoved in a corner. Though, it could be an angle, but the brake-run also feels quite short. What you could do is move the station area two-three or four tiles forward from where the station is now to add a small bit more breathing room for a 'bigger' station to be. The brake run would have to be reworked.

   

  On the flip side, this is still some intriguing work, and to take my post with a little grain of salt is fine by me. It is your work, after all. If you choose to keep as is, that's up to you, and is fine by me. Keep up the good work, otherwise!

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  G Force Offline

  The Archy can maybe be a bit more detailed here to give off that Columbia vibe you're going for, don't forget the skyrails and all the other elements which make the city unique, just a few of those details can help a lot.
  
  Generally I agree the station is a bit small, maybe remake it as one of the more memorable structures from the section of the game instead of just a standard building, might make it feel a bit more special.

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  saxman1089 Offline

  I think you can do more with the flat roofs, they seem a little boring atm, as well as the big grey brick retaining wall. Your queue entrance seems a bit detached from the coaster, whether its the physical separation or a perceived separation I'm not really sure. Everything else is looking good to me!

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  Impulse Offline

  It's not bad. The archy feels a little bit repetitive and overall pretty much the same. Perhaps some diversity and more details could help? You've got the skills, that's for sure. I think you have to detail it more and make it look interesting to look at. Right now, it's not bad, but it's not overwhelming either; it will need something eye-catchy to make it look even better. 

   

  Also, benches, benches & benches! Those planters are a perfect fit for some more benches (as you've placed just a couple under the lifthill) and it all might need some more life. It's good, but like everything else, improvements could be made. Keep it up.

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  ottersalad Offline

  Thank you guys for the comments, much appreciated! I think I’ll keep the station. I mimicked it off of the gondola platforms in the game since those are stations. But I definitely see what you guys mean!
  
  I’ll work a bit more on the facades.. they definitely could use a bit more.
  
  And I’ll add more path detailing as well.
  
  There’s also a few other structures in this area that I didn’t show that are definitely more recognizable, just want to leave those as a surprise!

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Very nice!

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