Screenshot / Goliath WIP

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    Your goliath looks a lot like a batman clone

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Nah, he nailed it.

  • Impulse%s's Photo

    Your buildings seem to be a little square-ish, but who am I to say that, having done square buildings ever since. The screen itself feels a little basic, but there isn't any next-level extremely good building without beginning with the basics. The coaster feels like it is missing some supports; especially before the first loop. The rest looks good. As always, keep it up.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    Not bad. Though, pretty much everything Impulse said is what I also agree should be tweaked. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

  • nin%s's Photo

    Not just your buildings, but everything seems a little square-ish. You've isolated everything into little boxed plots.

  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    Thank you for the comments guys. I’ll see what stuff I can tweak. I struggle to break out of the grid sometimes.
  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    get back to h2h ya pleb

  • robbie92%s's Photo

    I think everyone has a point of things seeming a bit squared off, but the pieces of this are great. The New Orleans architecture is awesome, and that wild mouse is fantastic. I'd work on your foliage, though, thickening some parts with clumps of grasses/bushes and thinning some areas out. 

  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    @cocoa: yes sir!

    @robbie: thanks! And I’ll see what I can change!
  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    Looking nice dude! Finish it up!

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