its clear that you know how to layer things which is a very important skill to learn early on. something you *shouldn't* do is scale the stories of your buildings from peep height. i'd severely recommend you scale all of your buildings to 6 unit height unless you're trying to exaggerate something.
This has a a great amount of potential; one thing I'd change is, I'd try and fray away from using the same colour (very mellow green, in this instance) as it looks kind of repetitive. Otherwise, you've got some huge potential!
This doesn't look that bad; I do agree that the colors look repetitive. Keep on improving mate, this is a huge improvement from what I've seen from you before.
I like this! I agree about the ceiling clearance being a bit too low on the two pitched-roof buildings, but I like the details, especially on both of the end buildings. The flat roof building is my favorite, but it has an odd presence in the row because the adjacent building is about two units too low.
As for colors, you will honestly never get a unanimous critique on whether colors work or not. I think there could be a bit more color variation between the two green buildings, but with their current color schemes they in no way look bad.
Keep on keeping on! I hope you will post more progress pics as you continue to work on this.
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SSSammy Offline
this has potential! i feel as though the scale could be a little bit taller, maybe just a unit or two
Xeccah Offline
its clear that you know how to layer things which is a very important skill to learn early on. something you *shouldn't* do is scale the stories of your buildings from peep height. i'd severely recommend you scale all of your buildings to 6 unit height unless you're trying to exaggerate something.
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
This has a a great amount of potential; one thing I'd change is, I'd try and fray away from using the same colour (very mellow green, in this instance) as it looks kind of repetitive. Otherwise, you've got some huge potential!
BirbSMB Offline
This doesn't look that bad; I do agree that the colors look repetitive. Keep on improving mate, this is a huge improvement from what I've seen from you before.
SimFox Offline
As for colors, you will honestly never get a unanimous critique on whether colors work or not. I think there could be a bit more color variation between the two green buildings, but with their current color schemes they in no way look bad.
Keep on keeping on! I hope you will post more progress pics as you continue to work on this.