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screen_4733 Bobsled WIP

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 7 years ago
  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo
    United States SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

    I like this, but careful about those paths though, might wanna find a way to spice them up

    posted 7 years ago
  • Daoniyella%s's Photo
    United States Daoniyella Offline
    I really like this. It transports a very good atmosphere :)
    posted 7 years ago
  • saxman1089%s's Photo
    United States saxman1089 Offline

    Very nice dude! Needs more finish though!

    posted 7 years ago
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    United States CoasterCreator9 Offline

    There's a bit too much side friction trackitecture for my tastes, and perhaps a bit too much queue covering in general. Overall, this shows promise. Mind the amount of path.

    posted 7 years ago
  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    United States ottersalad Offline

    Thanks! The paths are just placeholders at the moment. In terms of finish, definitely a work in progress. Figuring out how to use openRCT2.

    posted 7 years ago
  • SSSammy%s's Photo
    United Kingdom SSSammy Offline
    This looks lovely dude! Great to see work from you
    posted 7 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    Not bad, great queue line. Everything could do with a bit more fun, quirky stuff to make it a bit less sterile. Look at this coaster for examples. 

    https://rcdb.com/971.htm

    posted 7 years ago
  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    United States ottersalad Offline
    Thanks Faas. I’ll look for some more examples to get inspiration!
    posted 7 years ago
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Netherlands Liampie Offline
    Coaster looks great. Each individual building looks fine but I couldn't pick out two that go together well. Not every building has to be completely different, you're better off establishing a main style that covers 75% of the colours, textures and shapes of a building while you only vary the other 25% to give each building its individualiy. All humans look different but we have 99,99% of our DNA in common! Landscaping looks neglected.

    It's a promising screen but needs polishing!
    posted 7 years ago
  • Impulse%s's Photo
    Netherlands Impulse Offline

    Layout looks amazing! I love it. The path could use some planters, and perhaps consider adding more textures to that ocean of crazy path. Keep it up!

    posted 7 years ago
  • Faas%s's Photo
    Netherlands Faas Offline

    Regarding the layout: all helices are to the right. 

    posted 7 years ago
  • ottersalad%s's Photo
    United States ottersalad Offline

    How does this look in terms of more polish? I'm not sure how to do more quirky..

    I revamped the queue cover.. the side friction track seemed to not mesh well once I added more cso stuff.

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    posted 7 years ago
  • GammaZero%s's Photo
    United States GammaZero Offline

    How does this look in terms of more polish? I'm not sure how to do more quirky..
    I revamped the queue cover.. the side friction track seemed to not mesh well once I added more cso stuff.


    Holy shit, that's a lot of path.
    posted 7 years ago
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    United States CoasterCreator9 Offline

    Looks a lot better! I'd love to see some planters and small cart stalls to break up that path.

    posted 7 years ago
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo
    United States BlazingEmpireHD Offline
    Love the supports~! Layout and station are good too.
    posted 7 years ago

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