Screenshot / Liberdad

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  posted 7 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Classic small-scale style.  You're almost there with the atmosphere.  Something feels a little off about the buildings - can't really put my finger on it.

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  IonZer0 Offline

  Too much outlining with the posts.  Makes the buildings feel like industrial boxes.  Try to detail the walls more and use less of the bordering.  Really nice otherwise!

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  Louis! Offline

  foliage is great!

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  RWE Offline

  I like it.

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  Jappy Offline

  Very warm and likeable atmosphere. Please continue this.

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  Xeccah Offline

  Are you dutch? Feels a little too raw and not fleshed out enough yet. I'd definitely, at least, make the buffer between the fence and the trees  better, even if that would be much to the chagrin of Liam. 

   

  Still though you don't need to limit yourself *this* much with pt2, even if it's teaching you to build rather effectively as-is.

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  Iron Rattler Offline

  Thanks for the feedback guys. Yeah I don't know if I'm quite satisfied with all the buildings, particularly the white one. I'm happy to hear you like the foliage Louis as I've been trying to focus on that with this park. And yeah Shogo next project I do will definitely be on a modern bench, maybe yours. I'd estimate this project is about 60% done. Depending on how much of the stuff from last fall I redo

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  Cute style you have here! I would like to see colour in the foliage, perhaps. Otherwise, the foliage-work and architecture are lovely! Keep up the good work!

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