I like this a lot. I can definitely sense the Loch Ness Monster inspiration. I would remove that tree along the water so that the peeps have a nice view of the loops.
This is honestly brilliant. My only complaints are that the first turn before the lift should maybe be one unit higher and the buildings could use some trim.
Bouncing off what nin said; the foliage seems more space-filling than added with purpose. Rather than complimenting the area, it seems to be an attempt to avoid empty space. Otherwise, I agree with Dark_Horse and Coasterbill; your work is improving faster than you're finishing the park!
The village is really pretty, but also a bit lifeless. What is there to do in that area? This is cleaner and more readable than the bulk of your other architectural work, but you can still clean it up more. Those rope fences add nothing, get rid of them! Composition wise though, you did great. The screen overall is lovely and I'm looking forward to this park more and more!
I like how the layout is flowing so far, but I'm not a fan of the water at the level that it is. You have track touching it and path touching it, so you'd be flooded with any kind of rain. Recommend bringing it down a tile if you can. From a realistic note, supports shouldn't go under the water-- bring the footer above and start your supports from there.
The village is really pretty, but also a bit lifeless.
Ditto. This screams early RCT2 when no one added the extra level of detail needed to give some things life. There needs to be another layer of path detail, peeps, something to add that extra touch of movement needed.
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Lilith Fan Offline
this is gorgeous, i love the coaster placement
nin Offline
Dark_Horse Offline
I like this a lot. I can definitely sense the Loch Ness Monster inspiration. I would remove that tree along the water so that the peeps have a nice view of the loops.
Coasterbill Offline
This is honestly brilliant. My only complaints are that the first turn before the lift should maybe be one unit higher and the buildings could use some trim.
saxman1089 Offline
Looking good dude! I can't find anything I don't like at the moment. Maybe just some work on the foliage, like nin said.
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Bouncing off what nin said; the foliage seems more space-filling than added with purpose. Rather than complimenting the area, it seems to be an attempt to avoid empty space. Otherwise, I agree with Dark_Horse and Coasterbill; your work is improving faster than you're finishing the park!
Liampie Offline
The village is really pretty, but also a bit lifeless. What is there to do in that area? This is cleaner and more readable than the bulk of your other architectural work, but you can still clean it up more. Those rope fences add nothing, get rid of them! Composition wise though, you did great. The screen overall is lovely and I'm looking forward to this park more and more!
CedarPoint6 Offline
I like how the layout is flowing so far, but I'm not a fan of the water at the level that it is. You have track touching it and path touching it, so you'd be flooded with any kind of rain. Recommend bringing it down a tile if you can. From a realistic note, supports shouldn't go under the water-- bring the footer above and start your supports from there.
Looking forward to more.
Stoksy Offline
Your foliage selection bothers me, takes away from quite an impressive screen. Also agree with CP6 about the water
nin Offline