Screenshot / Naga

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 7 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Come up with a more original name.

  posted 7 years ago

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  SSSammy Offline

  it feels pretty short but i like it

  posted 7 years ago

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  saxman1089 Offline

  Lovely and a wonderful atmosphere. Get rid of the random floating roof in the water (lolz).

  posted 7 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Interesting coaster.  Feels like it'd fit a vekoma family invert more, but I like the idea of a small-train swinger.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Very nice!

  posted 7 years ago

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  I agree with Sammy; this feels rather short, but I like everything else here. Keep it up!

  posted 7 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  Thanks guys. The ride is intentionally short as i needed something to fill that sort-of-awkward space between the log flume and the transition into Jakarta, plus I thought it worked well as a family ride to be that short. 

   

  Sort of surprised that the score is relatively low- even with two votes- as this is probably my favorite stuff done, potentially ever. 

   

  Tell me what you guys want to see next and I'll probably get it out by next week.

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  Lilith Offline

  wonderful color choices

  posted 7 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  Everything is great, things I would change to make it better:

   

  Lift supports - too flimsy atm, possibly put a catwalk in too but that isnt a major flaw.

   

  Trains - I think the floorless swinging trains would suit it better, especially with the smaller layout.

   

  Great stuff though, I haven't been as keen on the Asian area as much as the other ones, but this is better now.

  posted 7 years ago

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  FredD Offline

  Screen with a lot of atmosphere to it. I also think the coaster lay-out is a bit short, I think an extra helix could do. 

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  GammaZero Fan Offline

  Wtf is that random piece of roof on the water

   

  0% for littering the sea

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  Scoop Offline

  63 percent?

  posted 7 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  This almost feels like it comes out of the same universe as Veteris Shores. I really like the atosphere here, although I'm not a fan of the texture on the tower on the left of the screen. I appreciate you using different and unique objects, but on that specific building it doesn't work IMO. The coaster itself looks great even though it's a bit short.

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  RWE Offline

  I don't get this screen. It is definitely atmospheric work, but then again the blue queue looks really akward for me. I've also seen the architecture done much better by you, it just feels like you randomly mixed interesting object textures that aren't used very often, but that doesn't make the whole thing working for me. Same goes for the foliage.

   

  All in all still not bad, but probably not the Quality people would expect from you, which might explain the low voting.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  "I don't get this screen. It is definitely atmospheric work, but then again the blue queue looks really awkward for me. I've also seen the architecture done much better by you, it just feels like you randomly mixed interesting object textures that aren't used very often, but that doesn't make the whole thing working for me. Same goes for the foliage.

  All in all still not bad, but probably not the Quality people would expect from you, which might explain the low voting."

   

  i completely disagree with literally everything you said but ok. if i put more focus in detail into the archy then it would become too much of a focus in an otherwise balanced screenshot. all of the textures chosen were done so deliberately and gods honest this is probably some of my best work i've ever done, in my opinion. cant see how this isn't "quality" in your eyes but whatever my dude.

   

   

  "This almost feels like it comes out of the same universe as Veteris Shores. I really like the atmosphere here, although I'm not a fan of the texture on the tower on the left of the screen. I appreciate you using different and unique objects, but on that specific building it doesn't work IMO. The coaster itself looks great even though it's a bit short."

   

  i like the tower, it adds a much needed vertical element there. the texture is needed to keep consistency throughout the area in general. but ok

   

  "Everything is great, things I would change to make it better:

  Lift supports - too flimsy atm, possibly put a catwalk in too but that isnt a major flaw.

  Trains - I think the floorless swinging trains would suit it better, especially with the smaller layout.

   

  Great stuff though, I haven't been as keen on the Asian area as much as the other ones, but this is better now."

   

  i agree with most of that. was going back and forth from thin and thick supports. i was using the floorless trains but i like the look of the standard cars tbh. thanks lew

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  G Force Offline

  Definitely use the floorless trains.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  yeah i know theyre more realistic for the model and i'll go back to them, i just love the arrow trains lol

  posted 7 years ago

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  Version1 Offline

  Default queue is literally the worst thing ever

  posted 7 years ago

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  Xeccah Offline

  you're literally the worst thing ever.

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