Screenshot / Tuscany

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 7 years ago

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  IonZer0 Offline

  If you filled the lower right portion of the screen more, and removed the coaster, (or just moved it beside the path) this would be quite good.

  posted 7 years ago

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  ar2910 Offline

  Overall this is charming. Some great ideas in here, especially the use of the Roman temples as more narrow collonades. I also like the use of the Martian object as a tower/dome, but it seems a little shoved to the back at the moment. I'd recommend bringing it to the front of the building to really emphasises it as a feature
  
  I agree with IonZer0 though. Certain elements, like the single rail coaster roof embellishments, are detracting from the clean edges and key sightlines. Plus it would be nice to see more interaction between the pink coaster and the paths or buildings. Right now it kind of looks like an afterthought draped over an already built area.
  
  Good work, and like the innovative use of the more unusual objects

  posted 7 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Not sure if I agree with the trackitecture on the roofs there, seems a bit messy. Otherwise pretty solid.

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  Trackitecture roofs do not do it for me. They're too messy. Particularly the single rail bits. Also, the roller coaster seems too 'spaghetti.' It does not seem to fit with your style.

   

  On the plus side, the architecture looks pretty nice, and I like this theme. All you need to do is give us a less messy, clear image on what you're going for, then this will go from a 35% to a 65% in no time! You're close, so close. Keep it up!

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  Ah, yes - the Tuscan desert.

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  Angroc Offline

  Only thing it lacks is vineyards instead of that desert. Then it'd be dope.

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  Jappy Offline

  I really like this screen. The archy, the details, the ride... All pretty unique stuff. Only the name doesn't make sense. How is this Tuscany?

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  mintliqueur Offline

  Interesting as always. Ride design seems questionable, though... 

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