Screenshot / jakarta

25-January 18
Seas of Antiquity
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posted 7 years ago
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Poke Offline

I just wish this was more unified and refined in terms of textures and colours.
posted 7 years ago
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CoasterCreator9 Offline

Did you post this on Discord? It looks familiar.

I feel like it lacks some of the "theme park feel" - signs, path aspects, peeps... Obviously it's unfinished but it would help a lot.
posted 7 years ago
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YoloSweggLord Offline

Feels a bit plain but solid composition nonetheless. Redo the mixed cobble/lotr path, it's not mixed enough.
posted 7 years ago
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][ntamin22 Offline

Good stuff, really working the dutch colonial thing. Those doorway textures are nice.
posted 7 years ago
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Jappy Offline

I really, really like this, but I agree it needs more.....life. Gift racks, signposts, peeps....
posted 7 years ago
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ar2910 Offline

This is a great mix of colonial and oriental architecture I agree though that it feels a little too... well ordered... for Jakarta. Some rounded paths and edges would help it all flow better IMO. Lovely work though, and I'd like to see more
posted 7 years ago
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Louis! Offline

love this, feels like such a good mix of textures and colours, its different, and i like it.
posted 7 years ago
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trav Offline

Looks great
posted 7 years ago
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saxman1089 Offline

Glad to see you're working on SOA again.
posted 7 years ago
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Coasterbill Offline

This is gorgeous. Easily the best screen from this project.
posted 7 years ago
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Dombot Offline

Best screen from you so far, I'd say. Getting SeaWorld vibes.
posted 7 years ago
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Lagom Offline

I kinda get some Cocoa-vibes looking at this. Looks darn good boyo.
Not sure if intentional, but there is a red arch piece missing.

Great work, as usual.
posted 7 years ago
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BlazingEmpireHD Offline

Definitely great work, but some of it still feels a little bit plain. Only a little bit, though. Keep up the great work!
posted 7 years ago
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G Force Offline

Did you post this on Discord? It looks familiar.

I feel like it lacks some of the "theme park feel" - signs, path aspects, peeps... Obviously it's unfinished but it would help a lot.

Agreed
posted 7 years ago
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alex Offline

I really love where you're going with this, it's just a tad lifeless atm.
posted 7 years ago
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Julow Offline

I have the same problem with this that I had with Coors. The archy is awesome but the foliage and landscape/relief makes it very difficult to read.
posted 7 years ago
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