Screenshot / Tuscany

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 7 years ago

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  Impulse Offline

  Meh, I liked your other screen better. This one is a little too messy for my tastes. Also, there's a little too much salmon pink in this screen, you might want to consider changing some of those track colours.

  posted 7 years ago

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  I agree with everything Impulse said. I am not a fan of this screen at all, unfortunately.

   

  It's messy, it's too pink, and some of the colours clash to me. For instance, those supports on the pink coaster against some salmon against some really yellow sand screams bloody murder to my eyes. It would also be fair to say that I am not very sold on this layout of the roller coaster.

   

  You've had some great screens in the past, but you seem to be complicating your screens in a way that does not help it out. I'd try to go for a less chaotic approach next time. You can do better, I know you can! Good luck!

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  Cocoa Offline

  This is awesome. Chaotic and messy but vibrant and cool

  posted 7 years ago

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  SSSammy Offline

  yeah these screens have been interesting

  posted 7 years ago

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