I think the riverside restaurant could be executed a little better; namely better objects for the vents and perhaps maybe a different color choice. I'm loving the rest.
That flatride looks great and the restaurant too, except for the funnels, there are some better alternatives for that that look a lot better. I think you could make the waterfront a bit more interesting by adding some different foilage objects and maybe some rocks. You're improving quite quickly and you are getting a feel for creating atmosphere, and that is to me one of the most important things when it comes to parkmaking. 75% from me
That condor looks so awesome! I love every bit of it. The rest looks quite good as well. It gives a little Ruhr-feel, like the area in the multiplayer park. I like it. Keep it up
This is just sort of okay, the foliage feels a bit rushed and brings down the screen a bit. Needs a bit more of a mix of grass types to avoid that repeating look you have in some parts. Your archy could use a bit more detail as well I feel.
Take an exhilarating ride on Riverhawk, the newest Bethlehem Steelworks attraction! For the more adventurous, fly with legs hanging free on Martensite! Or, if you're feeling a bit hungry, grab a meal at the outdoor Riverside Restaurant!
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CoasterCreator9 Offline
I think the riverside restaurant could be executed a little better; namely better objects for the vents and perhaps maybe a different color choice. I'm loving the rest.
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
I agree with CC9. Everything else looks great! I am loving that custom flat.
WhosLeon Offline
That flatride looks great and the restaurant too, except for the funnels, there are some better alternatives for that that look a lot better. I think you could make the waterfront a bit more interesting by adding some different foilage objects and maybe some rocks. You're improving quite quickly and you are getting a feel for creating atmosphere, and that is to me one of the most important things when it comes to parkmaking. 75% from me
Impulse Fan Offline
That condor looks so awesome! I love every bit of it. The rest looks quite good as well. It gives a little Ruhr-feel, like the area in the multiplayer park. I like it. Keep it up
G Force Offline
This is just sort of okay, the foliage feels a bit rushed and brings down the screen a bit. Needs a bit more of a mix of grass types to avoid that repeating look you have in some parts. Your archy could use a bit more detail as well I feel.
Julow Offline
That flat ride is wonderful !
I totally agree with G Force though, you need some colors to pop a bit more. Using more verdant colors for your foliage can help !