Excellent path interaction. I'm enjoying nearly all of the colors, but the blue building to the left side of the screen is a little jarring with that unicolored scheme. Add some more of the subtle brown or add more blue elsewhere to balance it out. Otherwise very nice!
The blue building would look better with a grey or brown roof. The walls seem fine because there's blue elsewhere on the screen, but placing a blue roof on top of them concentrates the blue too heavily.
Everything else looks nice, particularly the interaction between the coaster and the path.
It's very lively and charming. I think you can improve it by narrowing down the colour palette, simplifying the textures, and combining some of these buildings together, for example the blue building could just become a 1 storey section of the grill next to it (by making the textures/colours/trims/roof the same, using the correct scale etc). So less buildings but bigger, more "compound" buildings I guess.
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trav Offline
Probably some of your best work, it's nice to see your progression over the past 6 months or so.
disneylandian192 Offline
Excellent path interaction. I'm enjoying nearly all of the colors, but the blue building to the left side of the screen is a little jarring with that unicolored scheme. Add some more of the subtle brown or add more blue elsewhere to balance it out. Otherwise very nice!
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CoasterCreator9 Offline
You're evolving a lot as a player; I'd still like to see you get away from brown a little more, but your improvement is apparent.
Iron Rattler Offline
I agree with disneylandian. The blue building detracts from what is otherwise a very charming screen. Great ride interaction without looking forced
Terry Inferno Offline
The blue building would look better with a grey or brown roof. The walls seem fine because there's blue elsewhere on the screen, but placing a blue roof on top of them concentrates the blue too heavily.
Everything else looks nice, particularly the interaction between the coaster and the path.
alex Offline
It's very lively and charming. I think you can improve it by narrowing down the colour palette, simplifying the textures, and combining some of these buildings together, for example the blue building could just become a 1 storey section of the grill next to it (by making the textures/colours/trims/roof the same, using the correct scale etc). So less buildings but bigger, more "compound" buildings I guess.
Julow Offline
Very charming indeed, but it's hard to understand the theme. I totally agree with Alex overall.