Screenshot / The Adventure & Thunderbolt
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07-January 18
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This is giving off a nice vibe. There may be one two many tree types, and some of the tree colors seem off (especially in the trunks).
Keep it up, and change the crop so its not just water on the front page.
the crop alone would be a 100% from me tbh
the rest is pretty nice, agree about the tree types but it looks like a pretty view. that bit of the layout as it goes over the the brook looks especially nice to me
I like the rocky riverbed. Maybe add some foliage trim along the bank so it's not such a hard transition between land and water.
Listen to nin and G Force. Definitely add some water plants around the water-land transition. The dull brown coaster needs extra supporting on that banked turn. I love the small stream. Nicely done.
I second Sulakke in terms of water plants and doing more with the landscape. Aside from that, this has potential, like all your work.
I agree with Nin, Sulakke, Jappy...okay just about everyone here. What you have here is just a little bit underwhelming, but if you enhanced this with what everyone has stated here, rockwork, better foliage, subtle transitions from ground to water, underwater rockwork, etc, this could go from underwhelming at best to spectacular.
You have the potential, so, go use it!
You're getting so much better. I agree with the feedback, but you're well on your way.
Love this. Very charming. Has a bit of that old school karts n coasters vibe.