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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • biZarRo%s's Photo

    I really like the wide plaza, but there should be something in the middle between the two planters, like perhaps an American Flag.

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Dutch flag.

     

    I'd remove the cars, that object is a nightmare, and I'd add street lights in the middle of the path.

     

    Overall it's yet another nice screen, anyway.

  • inthemanual%s's Photo

    That one roof texture is really ugly, but maybe it's just the colors. I don't know why you're using tarmac for roofs, but using normal blocks for paths/parking. I also don't like that the planters are so dramatically different, yet so close to each other.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    I dislike the monorail used there, but the rest is nice.

     

    Whilst you don't use the best of objects, the structuring is nicely done, and you think a lot about the placement of things, and the little details (like the wooden coaster and the flags)

     

    I think the reason why your work is stronger than most peoples isn't because it's the best quality, it's because its got the most thought put into it.

  • Faas%s's Photo

    I like this.

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Thanks so much for the feedback everyone. I'm reading all of your critiques and will definitely be making some changes.

     

    I had a question about the cars though. I want to have cars in the parking lot as the park is peepable and it's very unrealistic to have the best spots in the lot empty on a crowded summer day. Are there any custom cars you think I should be using instead?

     

    In regards to the roof and road textures the only reason I didn't use the tarmac for the parking lot was that it looked really glitchy with the cars. As far as the roofs I'll change them.

     

    Thanks again! I really appreciate the help.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    If you look at Goliath: http://www.nedesigns...k/2628/goliath/

     

    There are objects of the car-ride cars. They are your best bet.

  • Chocotopian%s's Photo

    I think the long roofs could use just a little something extra, just to spice them up a bit.  But the peach coloured building is really nice in its simplicity.  I also think the selection of tall trees is a good choice.

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