Screenshot / Aktium
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18-December 17
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I quite love this work, Julow. Although, I am not sure about the grey tarmac. It almost feels too contrast-y.
Really well done, Julow! Keep it up!
I love this. It's so tranquil, but at the same time so energetic.
all that open space gives it this realistic feel to it.
I really like it. I only would make that red path above the water a bit thicker somehow, right now it appears to be floating.
The splash down on the water coaster doesn't look nearly long enough. Great attempt at Mack track with the wooden coaster track, but unfortunately it seems to glitch too much for my taste. Other than that I agree with what FredD said about the red path.
I think adding peeps will go a long way. Not a huge fan of the queue path and bridge, it feels unnatural.
That being said, I like it overall. A refreshing take on realism.
This is the Julow i like to see! Very nice work, though I agree with csw that peeps would add some needed life. Maybe some touches of brighter colours here or there...
I really dig that solitary, off-center tree in the planter there!
You're just so talented.
i dont like it.
doesn't feel right, in any way.
the textures clash, the structures aren't great, its all a bit meh.
i like it it just needs a bit o polish
I think this is heading in a great direction, but it needs more content, just seems too minimalistic. Add some things to the water (more rocks/foliage below, white water etc), also some more benches and trash cans. (Why is there a lamp in the middle of a staircase?) Buildings on the outer edges could use a facelift too. Also, it needs peeps, every screen needs peeps!
a second look at this and I noticed those buildings are supposed to be rubble? The arches in them look unnatural.
It needs some refinement throughout but nonetheless a great screen.