Looks good but I wouldn't place a coaster directly on the surface (wooden coaster).
Most of it isn't, but a trend i noticed with older woodies is that they often go right against the ground. Sometimes, in POVs, you can even see grass sticking up between the slats. I figured Id give it a shot here
Even though I abhor your foliage selection, its good. You were right to break NE conventions with putting the valley of the woodie flush with the ground. I'd go even further and show some grass poking out of it.
I'll actually agree with Shogo, I don't much care for the foliage, but even if I don't, it still looks pretty great.
I like the layout of the Arrow Minetrain. Though, I do feel it's haphazardly shoved in a corner that only the queue line guests could see. Then again, those types of rides don't usually have very many 'take picture' points.
I do like where this is going, yet again, and I am looking forward to see what you do next. Keep it up!
You're improving at a really quick pace... this is a very nice clean screen. I'm not sure about the color choices of the foliage and that orange building... it comes across as a bit gloomy.
Like everyone says, you're improving. But in terms of the colours of the foliage, using a lighter shade of green once in a while would help this massively.
I definitely agree with Shotguns about the woodie touching the ground. As you say, they often do that. However I also agree with BlazinEmpire about the awkward placement of the minetrain, mostly the placing of the station. It does look good, though, everything's nicely executed it's just the overall planning that's a bit weird.
Foliage is maybe a little unorthodox but I think it looks good. It could use just a little more underbrush, maybe.
Foliage is a little random; tightening up the underbrush will give it more of a natural feel. I echo the suggestions of making it feel a little less gloomy; one of your supports is also misaligned on the downward turn.
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Even though I abhor your foliage selection, its good. You were right to break NE conventions with putting the valley of the woodie flush with the ground. I'd go even further and show some grass poking out of it.
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
I'll actually agree with Shogo, I don't much care for the foliage, but even if I don't, it still looks pretty great.
I like the layout of the Arrow Minetrain. Though, I do feel it's haphazardly shoved in a corner that only the queue line guests could see. Then again, those types of rides don't usually have very many 'take picture' points.
I do like where this is going, yet again, and I am looking forward to see what you do next. Keep it up!
IonZer0 Offline
Looks great, agree on the foliage, needs more color variation.
Jaguar Offline
You're improving at a really quick pace... this is a very nice clean screen. I'm not sure about the color choices of the foliage and that orange building... it comes across as a bit gloomy.
Jappy Offline
Like everyone says, you're improving. But in terms of the colours of the foliage, using a lighter shade of green once in a while would help this massively.
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I definitely agree with Shotguns about the woodie touching the ground. As you say, they often do that. However I also agree with BlazinEmpire about the awkward placement of the minetrain, mostly the placing of the station. It does look good, though, everything's nicely executed it's just the overall planning that's a bit weird.
Foliage is maybe a little unorthodox but I think it looks good. It could use just a little more underbrush, maybe.
I notice you've used that old, ugly diagonal plank fence object. You ought to use this one instead: https://www.nedesign...11509/itmqdwf1/
Julow Offline
Good work SEPB !
Coasterbill Offline
You're getting so much better. That pixelated diagonal fence is horrible though. I want to say there's a fix for it in BGA?
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Foliage is a little random; tightening up the underbrush will give it more of a natural feel. I echo the suggestions of making it feel a little less gloomy; one of your supports is also misaligned on the downward turn.
The improvement is notable, keep it up.
Scoop Offline
I hope this gets finished.
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I was wondering the same. Might be better suited with 6-seater trains.
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
Six cars with the standard PTCs always looked just a bit too long to me. I'm not sure why I didn't go for the six seaters either.
Probably notScoop Offline
I could help finish it if you want?
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
I'm not really interested in still doing anything on NE. I'd rather just move on with my life
Scoop Offline
I could still finish it.
I don't know why your so butthurt though or what it's about.
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
I just felt a bunch of people where being real jerks to me and the community blamed me a lot for it. I don't really wanna get caught up in that