Screenshot / SkySwing, Go Karts, and Insanity

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  posted 7 years ago

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  Scoop Offline

  First off, please change the name. Second off improvement improvement improvement. Way to go. The only thing other than some stylistic changes would be to add some more life to it.

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  SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

  First off, please change the name. Second off improvement improvement improvement. Way to go. The only thing other than some stylistic changes would be to add some more life to it.

   It's a reference to my first park, im gonna keep the name

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  Scoop Offline

  
  

   It's a reference to my first park, im gonna keep the name

  Ok as long as you know I'm gonna have to take of 10 percentiles for every screen that is produced if you keep the name  

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  Louis! Offline

  lovely stuff

  posted 7 years ago

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  Cocoa Offline

  I think Jew Harp Amusement Park is still the most ridiculous name on the site. Goy wonderland

   

  good improvement though! solid realism

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  saxman1089 Offline

  Its looking good! The sky swing (or whatever its called) looks great, and the go karts are nice too. Maybe some billboards for the big grey wall to liven it up a bit, but great screen overall!

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  IonZer0 Offline

  While cheesy, I understand the name, and I think you should do whatever you feel fits the park best.  Again, massive improvement, I'm beyond impressed.  #itwasintheboat

   

  The Jew's harp, also known as the jaw harp, mouth harp, Ozark harp or juice harp, is a lamellophone instrument, which is in the category of plucked idiophones: it consists of a flexible metal or bamboo tongue or reed attached to a frame."

  -Wikipedia

   

  Also, tempting offer on that 100% vote there...

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  I am quite liking this project. Actually, I like this a whole bunch. Especially that last screen of your's. Some incredible work here, such as the spinner layout and support job. The archy appeals rightly with me, so good job on that.

   

  I am really looking forward for more, keep it up!

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  FredD Offline

  You are definitely improving. I agree with Scoop, it needs more life. Also, that massive gray wall on the left looks way too massive and too gray. 

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  nin Offline

  The balcony does not make sense. At least add a ladder or some sort of way for the maintenance worker to get down via the outside if you're going to have it. 

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  I do agree that there are more and better ways you can break up that gray wall. Give it some sort of cheesy advertising or a mural.

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  Dombot Offline

  *votes 100%*

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