Screenshot / Log flume... Part two!

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  • Faas%s's Photo

    Here's a few tips.

    - Those tables with umbrellas look way too bulky. I don't like the steel BM support as umbrella support and I don't like the footer as table.

    - When you have a log flume drop, make sure it isn't immediately followed by a turn, this will tend to injure people instead of splashing them with water.

    - It always looks a bit weird when walls of a building are made of wood and the roof is made of bricks/concrete.

    - Yellow reed looks weird.

    - If you want different tree colours I suggest you use more different tree types.

    You see, when you deliver more finished screens, people can give better tips on how to improve.

  • csw%s's Photo

    I echo everything Faas said, especially about the curve after the drop and the station building (which is a bit boxy). I suggest you spend a little more time on your screens before posting them. 

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    I approve of the flume puns though, didn't know if he was known internationally yet

  • ida%s's Photo

    Well Holdin' On got played a lot in the Netherlands and i like the song.

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