- Those tables with umbrellas look way too bulky. I don't like the steel BM support as umbrella support and I don't like the footer as table.
- When you have a log flume drop, make sure it isn't immediately followed by a turn, this will tend to injure people instead of splashing them with water.
- It always looks a bit weird when walls of a building are made of wood and the roof is made of bricks/concrete.
- Yellow reed looks weird.
- If you want different tree colours I suggest you use more different tree types.
You see, when you deliver more finished screens, people can give better tips on how to improve.
I echo everything Faas said, especially about the curve after the drop and the station building (which is a bit boxy). I suggest you spend a little more time on your screens before posting them.
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Faas Offline
Here's a few tips.
- Those tables with umbrellas look way too bulky. I don't like the steel BM support as umbrella support and I don't like the footer as table.
- When you have a log flume drop, make sure it isn't immediately followed by a turn, this will tend to injure people instead of splashing them with water.
- It always looks a bit weird when walls of a building are made of wood and the roof is made of bricks/concrete.
- Yellow reed looks weird.
- If you want different tree colours I suggest you use more different tree types.
You see, when you deliver more finished screens, people can give better tips on how to improve.
csw Offline
I echo everything Faas said, especially about the curve after the drop and the station building (which is a bit boxy). I suggest you spend a little more time on your screens before posting them.
Cocoa Offline
I approve of the flume puns though, didn't know if he was known internationally yet
ida Offline
Well Holdin' On got played a lot in the Netherlands and i like the song.