Screenshot / Founder's Way Food Court

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo

    Not bad, I think your archy scale is a bit small and it could use a bit more detail overall.  But as a whole this is pretty solid.

     

    Maybe you could do something around the wooden coaster in that open space to make it feel a bit more finished though, plain grass just makes it feel rushed.

  • saxman1089%s's Photo

    I ran across this project a while back just browsing and I'm glad you're still working on it!

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    i care more about the scale simply being consistent rather than being too small or too large. from what i've seen of your other stuff it has been consistent. very nicely framed and composed. i'd mix in some other shrub types than just those, though.

  • navalin%s's Photo
    Thanks for the feedback. Scale has definitely been an issue on this map... The whole park barely fits, so everything has to be ever so slightly smaller, except in areas where the park effectively got stretched for being at a weird angle that doesn't translate well in RCT. I'll see if I can bump up some of the sizes though to make it feel more normal.
  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Definite signs of improvement from some of the earlier versions of this.

     

    Agree with G Force about the archy and scale, but I also acknowledge I'm from the school of 5unit floors rather than 4unit floors so there's probably plenty of people who don't mind it as is (basically, I broadly agree with Shogo, consistency is important).

  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Founder's Way has a lot more of a charming vibe than this does.

     

    The paths feel wide, but more importantly I think you're missing a lot of foliage. There are a ton of trees and planter boxes here that make the area a lot nicer than it appears in this screen. Check out Stree View to see what I mean. https://goo.gl/maps/bmPskKZb9Pw

  • FredD%s's Photo

    I'm not such a fan of those roof textures. But besides that, it looks good.

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    According to that screen Coasterbill sent, this is really rather simple, and does not provide a wow factor. It is still pretty good though

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    El biggo glitcho :p

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo

    Oh my gosh I remember this area. It's been almost a decade since I visited Hersheypark but this is giving me some good flashbacks.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    so cute and quaint!

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