Screenshot / Japanese Pagoda

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  ida Offline

  Holy cr-

   

  That must've took ages.

  Nice use of the shops too.

   

  Yeah, it doesn't look very nice, maybe some more variation in the middle of the poles and some different colours (such as a red-white pattern going up), and some more stuff down at the entries of it.

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  csw Offline

  I think the second (and maybe third) tier of roof should extend out as far as the first. Right now it doesn't have the pagoda shape. 

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  Lotte Offline

  i like the looks of it, but i still think that the top is too wide, in most pagodes the tower gets less wide as it gets higher

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  ottersalad Offline

  nice topiaries.

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  Faas Offline

  I think it will look better in a built-up environment. Right now it really sticks out like an eyesore because it's the only building on the screen.

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  Louis! Offline

  The tiers are too close together and look the same width all the way up.

   

  Try spacing the tiers out a bit, and the higher you go, the narrower the tiers.

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  chorkiel Online

  The surroundings you already have look pretty good.

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  Midnight Aurora Offline

  My advice is to think bigger.

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