Some minor critiques, the top bits of the top spin should not be brick, try to find another object, your path us also a bit dull, need a but more of those finishing details perhaps.
Overall I think you're scale is a bit inconsistent, some roofs are 4 high, others 5, 6... Usually I try to make mine a minimum of 5. Make sure you pay attention to this as it's not as intuitive as NCSO. Another suggestion that might help you is to not overuse walls in your Archy, with all the shapes you need available using deco blocks and other shapes can really help.
I actually quite like this. the gold and green color scheme is very vibe-y. do more in cso! the only qualm I have is with the backstage building. the windows and fisherman arches look weird on it IMO. also, color the products on the racks different colors in the gift shop! cocoa tip #1 for colorful, lively parks with almost no effort
I'm not a fan of the roofs, the colors and textures are off. The rest is looking pretty good for a first CSO attempt. The topspin looks interesting.
The centerpiece was an attempt at a planet with moving rings, didn't turn out quite how I envisioned it... I'll take another look at the roofs to see what I can do.
this actually looks really nice. i love the swoop that the peeps can look down on.
Thanks!
Some minor critiques, the top bits of the top spin should not be brick, try to find another object, your path us also a bit dull, need a but more of those finishing details perhaps.
Overall I think you're scale is a bit inconsistent, some roofs are 4 high, others 5, 6... Usually I try to make mine a minimum of 5. Make sure you pay attention to this as it's not as intuitive as NCSO. Another suggestion that might help you is to not overuse walls in your Archy, with all the shapes you need available using deco blocks and other shapes can really help.
Yeah, I definitely failed to remember to keep a consistent scale. I've never actually done it before, everything has kinda been improv.
I actually quite like this. the gold and green color scheme is very vibe-y. do more in cso! the only qualm I have is with the backstage building. the windows and fisherman arches look weird on it IMO. also, color the products on the racks different colors in the gift shop! cocoa tip #1 for colorful, lively parks with almost no effort
Thanks for the tip, I originally wanted it to be a locker building, but a gift shop would definitely be more lively.
Edit: Welp, looks like I forgot to save, and then of course overwrote all the autosaves, so I'll be redoing most of this area for sure.
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Sulakke Offline
What the hell is that yellow car orgy?
I'm not a fan of the roofs, the colors and textures are off. The rest is looking pretty good for a first CSO attempt. The topspin looks interesting.
Terry Inferno Offline
The use of clocks are a beautiful example of CSO placed with the resourcefulness of an NCSO player.
SSSammy Offline
this actually looks really nice. i love the swoop that the peeps can look down on.
IonZer0 Offline
I'd love to take credit, but that's not my idea.
G Force Offline
Overall I think you're scale is a bit inconsistent, some roofs are 4 high, others 5, 6... Usually I try to make mine a minimum of 5. Make sure you pay attention to this as it's not as intuitive as NCSO. Another suggestion that might help you is to not overuse walls in your Archy, with all the shapes you need available using deco blocks and other shapes can really help.
Cocoa Offline
I actually quite like this. the gold and green color scheme is very vibe-y. do more in cso! the only qualm I have is with the backstage building. the windows and fisherman arches look weird on it IMO. also, color the products on the racks different colors in the gift shop! cocoa tip #1 for colorful, lively parks with almost no effort
IonZer0 Offline
The centerpiece was an attempt at a planet with moving rings, didn't turn out quite how I envisioned it... I'll take another look at the roofs to see what I can do.
Thanks!
Yeah, I definitely failed to remember to keep a consistent scale. I've never actually done it before, everything has kinda been improv.
Thanks for the tip, I originally wanted it to be a locker building, but a gift shop would definitely be more lively.
Edit: Welp, looks like I forgot to save, and then of course overwrote all the autosaves, so I'll be redoing most of this area for sure.
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
This is all quite nice for a first CSO attempt! Please do more of this, please.