Screenshot / Disney's California Bay

03-October 17
Disney's California Bay
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posted 7 years ago
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trav Offline

Some good stuff here. I don't think it's up to the level of something like DAW, but the overall atmosphere is great.

I think the boat needs some work, as does the detailing at path level. Get rid of the deco trims around the road, replace them with the flat road lines. and I also feel like the road feels too thin in comparison to the scale of the buildings.
posted 7 years ago
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dr dirt Offline

I'll echo what trav said. It's nice and needs a little extra umph to push it - more elaborate docks, some interests along the path (vendors, more seating, etc.). I also get the feeling the buildings could use some more windows.

Very nice start.
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CoasterCreator9 Offline

Very cute; needs a little life - what are the buildings? No signage or other details tell me what's inside. I also echo what is said above as far as path details etc; excellent start.
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Xeccah Offline

you're so close to developing your own style and being really, really good at the game.
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G Force Offline

Oh hey Pac.
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BlazingEmpireHD Offline

I love the boat! I have to agree with CC9, in the likes that I would like to see some signage. Other than that, this is really rather lovely.
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Cocoa Offline

I like what you did with the gravel retaining wall. that feels really real and i hadn't seen that before. other than that, yeah good- but done before!
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Lotte Offline

So lovely, but maybe a bit empty somehow. peeps should do this wonders, but maybe try adding in some warmer colours along the path and the boats
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posix Offline

Shotguns?, on 03 Oct 2017 - 11:11 PM, said:

you're so close to developing your own style and being really, really good at the game.
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Mr.Brightside711 Offline

You should change the palm tree trunks to grey instead of tan.
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RCT2day Offline

Stunning. Love this so much. A few things to think of:

-Add some different supports like a truss or something to the bottom of that green railroad track

-don't leave that rock hill like that, obviously

-diagonal street lane dividers

-put some other boat in between those two docks

-needs peeps obviously

85% from me
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