Not enough to see compared of your other screenshots. 1/2 of the screen is just lifeless path. But from the screenshot you shared on discord I know the rest of the area is great.
technically strong, as usual, but the screen doesn't really have anything in it. There's no motion, nothing eye-catching, the most interesting single element is a coaster bunny hop.
I think it might be verging on a bit too LL-ish. I think some of the major points (ie. tower, with just a pumpkin piece) could use some accentuation with some more detail pieces other than strictly the concessions used in LL.
I like the idea and atmosphere being built for sure, but I'd want to say go a little bit more on the highlight points - for example, a support archway over the path with the bunny hill, flashier tower.
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Julow Offline
Not enough to see compared of your other screenshots. 1/2 of the screen is just lifeless path. But from the screenshot you shared on discord I know the rest of the area is great.
IonZer0 Offline
Agreed with Julow. What's there is great, but there's just so little of it.
nin Offline
I'm not sure I like some of the object and texture choices, it almost seems too much. I do like the domed track covers, however.
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
Four amazing screens right on course with each other. That being, stellar, relatively unmatched work.
There are a few bits that are quite pretty, but, this feels rather empty, unfortunately. Otherwise, this is still rather impressive!
inthemanual Offline
technically strong, as usual, but the screen doesn't really have anything in it. There's no motion, nothing eye-catching, the most interesting single element is a coaster bunny hop.
dr dirt Offline
I think it might be verging on a bit too LL-ish. I think some of the major points (ie. tower, with just a pumpkin piece) could use some accentuation with some more detail pieces other than strictly the concessions used in LL.
I like the idea and atmosphere being built for sure, but I'd want to say go a little bit more on the highlight points - for example, a support archway over the path with the bunny hill, flashier tower.
Xeccah Offline
its mostly because im really shit @ taking screenshots