Screenshot / Mundos Magicae... A world of mystery and adventure!

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Great entrance! My only real complaint would be the bright red maintenance doors. I would make them dull red so that they don't stick out too much. The road lines add more glitches than that they actually add to the area. You can do without them.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    yeah the doors are off putting but the rest is gorgeous.

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Where the fuck did this come from?! Gorgeous archy

  • Version1%s's Photo

    *Jappy's Mundos Magicae

  • FredD%s's Photo

    Wow, this is for sure your best screen yet. You improved a lot on architecture!

  • Royr%s's Photo

    Fantastic work, well done!

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    i really like the building with light brown walls and pale green roof. it feels right to me. I think you're almost getting the belle epoque look right, but maybe are just missing it. I think the buildings right now feel a bit disjointed, and I still feel like you're being held back by some older object choices and blocky styles that would be right in an older european-style park but don't quite mesh with a more detailed, architecturaly precise style. does that make sense? idk

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    This almost doesn't look like Jappy's work!... which is a compliment, but at the same time not an insult. Your previous work has been excellent, but there's something about it that always makes it identifiable to your building style. This breaks the mold into a different execution of construction we haven't seen from you before, and it's beautiful. Awesome job!

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Everything is great except the bright blue roof color and texture. It's really distracting compared to.the rest of the colors in the screenshot.

    I'm also not really a fan of all the grey roof usage, either flat or pirate. Black and brown respectively would work much better I think, adding contract without being distracting.

    I do really like this though, feels fresh and grand.
  • Steve%s's Photo
    Is that a bed in the center of the courtyard? Why?

    Screen is good overall. Right side is significantly less good than the left. I think if you nixed the blue building altogether and continued that side as the same style you have going on the left then you'll have a more cohesive image here. Keep going!
  • Version1%s's Photo

    Is that a bed in the center of the courtyard? Why?
     
     

     

    Dreaming

  • Impulse%s's Photo

    Amazing.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I love the gate structure itself, and those lattice structures within the park are always fun additions.

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo

    Holy crap I'm in love with that entrance archway.

  • RWE%s's Photo

    You know my opinion, really like it!

  • Julow%s's Photo

    Very good entrance, I like the last screens you shared !

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    That's a hell of a lot of comments! Thanks everyone! :)

     

    @Sulakke: doors ae fixed, I'm not sure if I'm getting rid of the roadlines, I quite like them.

     

    @G Force: modified the roofs a little, but the grey pirate roofs and the blue roofs are here to stay. I like them way too much.

     

    @Steve: V1's right, reference to dreaming. As I said, I'm not getting rid of it, but I'm planning on adding another building on the right to complete that side.

  • alex%s's Photo

    Dope.

     

    I think having both grey walls and grey roof on the archway building isn't working. Black roof?

     

    I also think the diagonal at the bottom of the plaza extends too far. It's making the space in front of the Blue-roof building awkward.

     

    Also for some reason I feel like the bed should have wings haha.

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Excellent screen, Jappy! It looks great to be honest. I do agree with Sulakke on the road lines though. Not sure they have to go, but I would change the colour to brown and try to find a way to avoid the glitching.

    Also the middle building being almost eniterly grey seems weird to me. It almost looks like it doesn't belong in this otherwise colourful setting.

    But still, the screen is freakin great. Well done.

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