Screenshot / Diablo
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10-September 17
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Turtle Bay Resort and Theme Park
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I'm just a noob, but it seems to me like you may have gone a bit overboard with the foliage amount. You can't tell where the trees start and end. I know the idea is a dense forest, but this seems a bit severe to me. The go kart track looks neat though, I like the wide track. I'm guessing your coaster is suppose to be like the Outlaw Run Roll? because otherwise there are no wooden roller coasters with inversions like that as far as I know.
I like the foliage too, doesn't seem overwhelming to me. I like the go kart track itself, but I'd consider trying to change the diagonal pieces a bit (the fences and the track itself) to match the rest of the track.
Other than RMC, there are also several Gravity Group wooden coasters with inversions. But judging by the color of the rails, I think this is meant to be RMC.
this looks really good! the part of the layout in the centre looks really well developed. the go kart tracks interacting with it look great as well. great composition, even if the foliage could be better, i dont think it is an outrageous detriment at this point.
keep up the good work!
I like this. It feels very atmospheric, even though there are not very many 'dramatic' areas which really intrude how an area would come across in a park. I like that aspect. Be simple, without being too simple.
My only nitpick is maybe cut down on the number of trees, but that is more-so up to you. Good job on this!
atmospheric. nice work.
Neat. Try to have more variation when doing the foliage though, in my honest opinion. The coaster's got sick interactions. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more screens of this in the future.
Very nice, would be better if you changed the wooden coaster roofs on the green building on the right, it's a bit too much but otherwise it's very atmospheric indeed.