Screenshot / Renovated Entrance - Blue Oak Amusement Park

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  • Julow%s's Photo

    Wow, this screen is phenomenal. Probably one of the most beautiful NCSO entrances I've ever seen. 

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    Good Christ. What can I say? This is so stunning. I am now really excited for the end project!

  • Impulse%s's Photo

    Stunning.

  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Excellent. Great planter and sign.

    Can you fix the wall that's glitching through the path?
  • alex%s's Photo

    Wonderful. Great to see you posting some finished screens.

     

    The custom trees are good.. surprisingly subtle. Maybe change the bushes in barrels behind them to something different though.

    I like the blue striped canvas motif that you've got across the park.

  • Steve%s's Photo
    Atmosphere is great in this. Structures are also really good and the composition is lovely. However, I can't help but think the park sign would be better suited elsewhere. It's awesome, and you've got it off to the left of the entrance. Shoehorning it in the center of the plaza here probably won't work, maybe somewhere on the Main Street of the park? A part of me feels it should be front and center, yet at the same time having it where you have it now works too. I'm torn.

    Nice work!
  • G Force%s's Photo
    I like how you managed to name all three screenshot in a different way despite uploading them at the same time.
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Very nice!

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo

    This is NCSO? Holy fuck, this is nice.

  • posix%s's Photo

    Still fantastic.

    Colours strike me as a bit too much as I see this again. Makes sense from what you're building, but I never think you should prioritise what makes sense over what looks nice.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    "I like how you managed to name all three screenshot in a different way despite uploading them at the same time."

    LOL

     

    "Wonderful. Great to see you posting some finished screens."
    "Very nice!"
    "This is NCSO? Holy fuck, this is nice."
    "Still fantastic."
    "Wow, this screen is phenomenal. Probably one of the most beautiful NCSO entrances I've ever seen. "
    "Nice work!"
    "Stunning."
    "Excellent. Great planter and sign."
    "Good Christ. What can I say? This is so stunning. "

    Thanks, y'all! :)

     

    "Can you fix the wall that's glitching through the path?"

    Already fixed. :mantis:

    "The custom trees are good.. surprisingly subtle. Maybe change the bushes in barrels behind them to something different though."

    I'll try out some alternatives.

    "I like the blue striped canvas motif that you've got across the park."

    Yeah, it works a lot to break path and inject color.

    "Atmosphere is great in this. Structures are also really good and the composition is lovely. However, I can't help but think the park sign would ... I'm torn."

    I get what you are saying, and it sort of is shoehorned, but out of all of the suggestions I still believe where I have it is best.


    "Colours strike me as a bit too much as I see this again. Makes sense from what you're building, but I never think you should prioritize what makes sense over what looks nice."

    What you're saying makes sense from an entirely realistic angle, but I'm not trying just to do a realistic park. I want to give off the campy, not totally overwhelming feeling of scenario play with Blue Oak, and I think some more liberal color choices allow it to get there.

    "I am now really excited for the end project!"

    Give me a couple days, OK? :)
     

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Don't know where to start. Best NCSO I've seen without a doubt. Remind me to look at this when I start my American NCSO park in the future, I have a feeling this is going to be a big inspiration...

     

    I love the atmosphere, I love the colours, the forms, the general feel of the area. Imagine this with peeps, it must be fantastic. 

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