Screenshot / mouse ride

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Louis!%s's Photo

    cute

  • Fisch%s's Photo

    very nice but how comes those turntable gates are between two or more rides? Looks like a park entrance almost but there are rides either side of it somehow?

    The supports of the mouse ride are very intricate. Not a fan of the rusty wall texture on the map edge.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    The trackitecture bits desperately need a color change. It feels like you just left them on the defult scheme.

    Rest is nice, unfortunate it's so close to the edge of the map though. Makes it a bit awkward.
  • Xeccah%s's Photo

    This feels oddly composed, as though you added the section right of the turntables as a way just to fill in the space. The path bottleneck after the gate is also awkward.I think you're better off without anything right of the gate in general.

  • nin%s's Photo

    Agreed with G Force about the trackitecture. If it didn't have the grey slab of path under it it wouldn't be much of a problem, but otherwise it should probably be changed.

     

    I really like the mouse otherwise, and the're something about that rainbow train with the blue and white coaster that I just love.

     

    I just don't really get the composition of the area tho. is this outside the park? That building combined with the map edge makes this look like the park border. Why would there be a small carnival outside if that's so?

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Love the multi coloured train. That little mouse is cute. Good job.

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo
    Kind of squished in the corner.

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