I think compositionally it's kinda weak because you tend to just have attractions sitting off the side of paths. And usually straight paths. Try and create more plazas - for instance if you removed the hill with the mine object on you could create a nice square in front of the station and nestled between the coaster track.
The repetition with those adjacent building forms is weird too.
Nice but feels very empty and almost uninspired. Foliage is a bit too repetitive also. The whole thing misses a lot of theming in my opinion. Not a fan of the giant umbrellas on the left.
Supports of the powered coaster are maybe a bit too thin.
On the other hand I love that river rapids station and the interaction with the train.
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alex Offline
Its not bad..
I think compositionally it's kinda weak because you tend to just have attractions sitting off the side of paths. And usually straight paths. Try and create more plazas - for instance if you removed the hill with the mine object on you could create a nice square in front of the station and nestled between the coaster track.
The repetition with those adjacent building forms is weird too.
Julow Offline
Nice but feels very empty and almost uninspired. Foliage is a bit too repetitive also. The whole thing misses a lot of theming in my opinion. Not a fan of the giant umbrellas on the left.
Supports of the powered coaster are maybe a bit too thin.
On the other hand I love that river rapids station and the interaction with the train.
Sorry if I'm a bit tough !
MCI Offline
redid most of the area. Obviously not finished.
Not sure what to do with the seating area in the middle or the t-Shirt stall in the top right of the plaza.
Coasterbill Offline
I feel like this could benefit a lot from smaller, less overwhelming paths and maybe some more trees. It's nice though.